Services
If there is a specific service you want that is not listed below, please get in touch for a customised quotation.
Developmental Editing
Some stories hook you from the first sentence; others take a little longer to unfold. Most readers decide whether to continue within the first few pages, which makes a compelling start essential. A first‑chapter analysis gives you a clear read on how effectively your opening sets tone, stakes, and reader expectations. I look closely at:
Narrative setup: how you introduce the world, characters and conflict
Voice and tone: the rhythm and style of the prose, and how it establishes mood
Character introduction: what we learn about the protagonist and their motivations
Theme emergence: early hints of the book’s deeper ideas or emotional core
Pacing and tension: how you balance exposition and intrigue
Reader engangement: whether the opening compels the reader to continue
You will receive an editorial letter with a clear roadmap for revision.
Please allow 1-4 weeks for this service.
Line and Copy Editing
A line and copy edit refines your manuscript at the sentence level, strengthening how the writing reads, sounds, and carries meaning. I focus on:
Sentence flow: smoothing awkward phrasing and improving rhythm
Clarity and tone: ensuring the voice is strong and consistent
Word choice: tightening language for precision and effect
Emotional resonance: enhancing the reader’s experience at the line level
Grammar and mechanics: fixing errors and inconsistencies
Punctuation: ensuring clarity and correctness
Style guide alignment: I am proficient in Chicago/Oxford rules
Fact and continuity checks: catching contradictions, timeline slips, or repeated details
You will receive your manuscript back with editing done directly on the page (with Track Changes in Word), a style sheet, and, if desired, a 30 minute call to discuss my comments.
Please allow 4-8 weeks for this service.
First Chapter Analysis
Once your manuscript is complete, I offer a developmental edit that looks at the story as a whole and helps you shape your work into its strongest form before any line‑level refinement begins. I will look closely at:
Story structure: whether the narrative or argument is shaped effectively
Voice and tone: consistency and strength of the narrative voice
Character development: clarity, motivation, and emotional arc
Thematic clarity: what the book is about and how well that comes through
Pacing and flow: how momentum is built or lost
Reader engagement: whether the manuscript pulls the reader forward
You will receive an editorial letter and, if desired, a 30 minute call to discuss my comments.
Please allow 2-6 weeks for this service.
Sensitivity Reading
A sensitivity reading provides a careful review of your manuscript to ensure that representations of cultures, identities, and lived experiences are accurate, respectful, and free from unintended harm. I examine the text through the lens of the communities portrayed and offer targeted recommendations to strengthen authenticity, nuance, and credibility. This service is not about censoring your story, but rather strengthening it with by ensuring outdated and/or offensive language is pointed out.
You receive a clear, actionable report outlining revisions that support both artistic integrity and responsible storytelling.
You will receive an editorial letter and, if desired, a 30 minute call to discuss my comments.
Please allow 2-6 weeks for this service.
Copy Editing
Copy editing is the final step if you're confident in your writing and simply need me to check spelling and grammar. I offer this service by reviewing your manuscript line by line, correcting errors, tightening phrasing where needed, and ensuring every detail aligns with your chosen style guide. This service includes:
Grammar and mechanics: fixing errors and inconsistencies
Punctuation: ensuring clarity and correctness
Style guide alignment: I am proficient in Chicago/Oxford rules
Fact and continuity checks: catching contradictions, timeline slips, or repeated details
You will receive your manuscript back with editing done directly on the page (with Track Changes in Word) and a style sheet.
Please allow 4-6 weeks for this service.
Manuscript Assessment
Wheter you're completely finished or almost there, a manuscript assessment gives you an evaluation of your entire manuscript. You will receive clear, constructive guidance on what’s strong, what needs attention, and the most effective ways to elevate the manuscript as a whole, and how to move forward. I will provide:
Big‑picture analysis: strengths, weaknesses, and how well the manuscript achieves its goals
Story and structure review: plot, pacing, narrative arc, and cohesion
Character and voice evaluation: clarity, motivation, consistency, and tone
Marketability insights: genre fit, audience expectations, and publishing potential
Actionable recommendations: specific guidance on how to improve the manuscript’s overall effectiveness
You will receive an editorial letter and, if desired, a 30 minute call to discuss my comments.
Please allow 2-6 weeks for this service.
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